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Chapters (45)
  1. Cover
  2. Title Page
  3. Dedication
  4. CHAPTER ONE
  5. CHAPTER TWO
  6. CHAPTER THREE
  7. Happy Birthday in Jazz Clarinet
  8. CHAPTER FOUR
  9. CHAPTER FIVE
  10. CHAPTER SIX
  11. Natalie vs. Reid
  12. CHAPTER SEVEN
  13. CHAPTER EIGHT
  14. The First Chair Wars
  15. CHAPTER NINE
  16. CHAPTER TEN
  17. CHAPTER ELEVEN
  18. Outplayed
  19. CHAPTER TWELVE
  20. CHAPTER THIRTEEN
  21. CHAPTER FOURTEEN
  22. The Prank War
  23. CHAPTER FIFTEEN
  24. CHAPTER SIXTEEN
  25. CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
  26. The Setup
  27. CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
  28. CHAPTER NINETEEN
  29. CHAPTER TWENTY
  30. Aaron Jacobson’s Protégé
  31. CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE
  32. CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO
  33. CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE
  34. Anything But Music
  35. CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR
  36. CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE
  37. CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX
  38. CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN
  39. CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT
  40. CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE
  41. CHAPTER THIRTY
  42. Acknowledgments
  43. More from the Author
  44. About the Author
  45. Also by Marisa Kanter

“I love the passion everyone is bringing here,” Dad says. He draws a line down the center of the board and writes “MORITZ” on one side and “MORITZ” on the other. “So let’s work through this. Why keep Moritz?”

Dad holds out the marker and we all take turns listing our reasons to keep or cut Moritz.

MORITZ MORITZ

He’s the VILLAIN

“Hate is a closed window” is a bop

Removes a source of conflict between Adina and Emma

He’s! the! VILLAIN!

Replace his role with an ensemble = a bigger cast = a larger audience = A BETTER CHANCE AT SELLING OUT

More time for Emma/Kris banter

The symbolism is too on the nose

Also the plot makes no sense, like WHY would Emma trust a dude she just met to protect her kingdom?

I become more protective with each new point added to the MORITZ column.

“You can’t cut Moritz on the basis of wanting more banter!”

Danica’s turquoise fingers drum against her arms. “Excuse me for knowing my strengths.”

“The evil trash people ensemble makes sense,” Fitz relents.

“What if we killed Moritz at the end of act one?” Henry suggests. “We’re destroying ourselves. It’s symbolic. It’s a comp—”

“No!” I exclaim. Evil trash people make sense? Kill off our villain? Nothing makes sense. “We are so far past the point of character development. So can we please just… unveil the songs like planned and stay in our lanes?”

Dad clears his throat. “Natalie. Cool it with the dramatics.”

His tone is harsh.

It pulls me out of my panic-induced spiral.

At school, Dad’s cool teacher demeanor is strong. But the way he says my name? It’s parental. It indicates another conversation to come. It’s further proof that no matter how many times Aaron Jacobson feigns neutrality with his Switzerland and pro/con lists, that is never the reality. It doesn’t matter the subject.

Also? I’m not dramatic. I’m protective.

Fitz’s blue mascaraed eyes connect with mine. “Natalie, I love your script, but this change feels right. For a musical. You know?”

“We always struggled with Moritz,” Henry admits.

“I felt that,” Reid says. “On the page. His voice fell flat compared to the rest of the cast.”

“Since when are you an expert on voice?” I ask.

“I know good writing when I read it,” Reid retorts.

“Well, I know a bad Melted decision when I hear it.”

Danica’s eye roll is scathing. “Really? Because it’s four against one. And what we need are directors who don’t argue over every creative decision. Also, this isn’t even about Melted. I can’t tell if you legitimately hate each other or secretly want to kiss each other’s faces but whatever this—” Danica waves at Reid and me “—is? It is embarrassing. I am embarrassed for you. Stop. In case you forgot, there are actual stakes.”

Reid is silent.