Back The Great Pretenders
Chapters (55)
  1. Cover
  2. Praise for The Great Pretenders
  3. Dedication
  4. Epigraph
  5. PART I
  6. Chapter One
  7. Chapter Two
  8. Chapter Three
  9. Chapter Four
  10. Chapter Five
  11. Chapter Six
  12. Chapter Seven
  13. PART II
  14. Chapter Eight
  15. Chapter Nine
  16. Chapter Ten
  17. Chapter Eleven
  18. Chapter Twelve
  19. Chapter Thirteen
  20. Chapter Fourteen
  21. Chapter Fifteen
  22. Chapter Sixteen
  23. Chapter Seventeen
  24. PART III
  25. Chapter Eighteen
  26. Chapter Nineteen
  27. Chapter Twenty
  28. Chapter Twenty-one
  29. Chapter Twenty-two
  30. Chapter Twenty-three
  31. Chapter Twenty-four
  32. Chapter Twenty-five
  33. Chapter Twenty-six
  34. PART IV
  35. Chapter Twenty-seven
  36. Chapter Twenty-eight
  37. Chapter Twenty-nine
  38. Chapter Thirty
  39. Chapter Thirty-one
  40. Chapter Thirty-two
  41. Chapter Thirty-three
  42. Chapter Thirty-four
  43. Chapter Thirty-five
  44. PART V
  45. Chapter Thirty-six
  46. Chapter Thirty-seven
  47. Chapter Thirty-eight
  48. Chapter Thirty-nine
  49. Chapter Forty
  50. AUTHOR’S NOTE
  51. Readers Guide
  52. DISCUSSION QUESTIONS
  53. Acknowledgments
  54. About the Author
  55. What’s next onyour reading list?

He showed up about four. He stretched his long, lanky frame out on the sofa and read. At six he knocked on my office door. “I wish to hell I had written this picture. I love the goddamned story. I love the goddamned train wreck. I’d be proud to have my name on it.”

“Good,” I said, pleased that my intuition had been correct.

“Now, where in hell are you going to offer a script like this?”

I sent it to MGM, to Jonathan’s odious father, where The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea was in preproduction, but MGM was not the least bit interested in Adios Diablo. Mr. Moore returned it to me within twenty-four hours with a terse note that read, You must be out of your mind. Peons rising up against the railroad? Communist propaganda.

One afternoon a few weeks later the phone rang, and instead of putting the call through, Thelma came to my door. Whoever it was would not give their name. She gave me a look of foreboding. I took the call in my office while she lounged in the doorway.

An ironic masculine voice said, “I understand you’re having an affair.”

Had Al Gilbert or some other slimeball sniffed out Terrence and me? “Is that so? Who with?”

“With me. I heard it from my wife. I am in deep shit, matrimonially speaking.”

I laughed with relief and waved okay to Thelma. “Sorry, Carleton. Would it help if I denied it in Variety?”

He was calling about another script by one of my clients, a modest whodunit Paragon wanted to produce. Looking for paper to take notes, I picked up one of the many rejections for Adios Diablo. I described it to Carleton in glowing terms.

“No thanks, Roxanne. It’s too Mexican, and anything with insurrection is like catnip to the American Legion and the Motion Picture Alliance. Believe me, I don’t want John Wayne and Ward Bond sniffing around Paragon. Besides, you say it has a train wreck? Too expensive. Paragon is not MGM.”

“MGM has turned it down.”

He gave a rueful laugh. “And you want me to produce it?”

“Read it. Just read it. It’s the most exciting script I’ve ever offered. Really. Stupendous. And we are lovers, don’t forget.”

“You are very persuasive. Send it over to Paragon this afternoon with your courier, and I’ll read it.”

Ha ha, I thought to myself, as I picked up my purse and keys, Carleton Grimes thinks I have a courier—or, more likely, he was trying to flatter me.