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Chapters (64)
  1. Cover
  2. Dedication
  3. August
  4. Day 1: Saturday
  5. Chapter 1
  6. Chapter 2
  7. Day 2: Sunday
  8. Chapter 4
  9. Chapter 5
  10. Chapter 6
  11. Chapter 7
  12. Chapter 8
  13. Day 3: Monday
  14. Chapter 10
  15. Chapter 11
  16. Chapter 12
  17. Chapter 13
  18. Chapter 14
  19. Chapter 15
  20. Chapter 16
  21. Day 4: Tuesday
  22. Chapter 18
  23. Chapter 19
  24. Chapter 20
  25. Chapter 21
  26. Day 5: Wednesday
  27. Chapter 23
  28. Chapter 24
  29. Day 6: Thursday
  30. Chapter 26
  31. Chapter 27
  32. Chapter 28
  33. Chapter 29
  34. Day 7: Friday
  35. Chapter 31
  36. Chapter 32
  37. Chapter 33
  38. Chapter 34
  39. Day 8: Saturday
  40. Chapter 36
  41. Chapter 37
  42. Chapter 38
  43. Chapter 39
  44. Chapter 40
  45. Chapter 41
  46. Chapter 42
  47. Chapter 43
  48. Day 9: Sunday
  49. Chapter 45
  50. Chapter 46
  51. Chapter 47
  52. Chapter 48
  53. Chapter 49
  54. Chapter 50
  55. Chapter 51
  56. Chapter 52
  57. Day 10: Monday
  58. Two months later
  59. Chapter 54
  60. Acknowledgements
  61. Detective Clare Mackay
  62. Canelo Crime
  63. About the Author
  64. Also by Marion Todd

‘So, you’d lost a lot of money, Mark. What did you do next?’

He seemed to be considering what to say. Then he spoke again. ‘You get to hear of folk, folk that’ll lend you a few quid.’ He shrugged. ‘I reckoned if I did some extra shifts, earned some cash I could pay it off.’

‘You borrowed money?’ Clare said.

‘Aye.’

‘Who from?’

Again, he took a few moments before speaking. ‘Just some guy. In a pub. Said he’d see me every Friday and I’d give him the cash.’

Clare said, ‘And did you?’

‘For a bit, aye. Then he said the interest rate was going up and I owed him more than when I’d started. Said I’d have to keep paying.’

‘How much did you borrow?’

‘A grand.’

‘You borrowed a thousand pounds from a moneylender?’

‘Aye.’

‘And… how much did this man say you owed?’

He hesitated then said, ‘Eight grand.’

Clare’s eyes narrowed. ‘You borrowed one thousand pounds and, despite making weekly repayments, you now owe eight thousand pounds?’

‘Aye. Or actually I don’t. Not now.’

Clare sighed. ‘Mark, you could have come to us. We’d have helped.’

He shook his head. ‘I doubt it.’

Chris said, ‘Was there something preventing you coming to us?’

He looked down. ‘Not at first, I suppose. I mean, they’ve got my SIA card…’

Clare frowned and Mark seemed to notice this.

‘Security Industry Authority,’ he explained. ‘I can’t work without it. Took my driving licence, too. Said I’d get one of them back when I’d paid half and the other when I’d paid in full. But the interest…’

Clare’s expression hardened. ‘These people,’ she said. ‘They work it so you never pay the debt off.’

He nodded. ‘Aye, I know that now.’

Chris leaned forward. ‘Mark, you said, not at first. Did something change?’

He looked at Chris for a moment then he gave a slight nod. ‘Aye.’

‘Go on.’

‘Got a phone call. Didn’t know who. But the guy said he had my SIA card and my licence. Said I’d get them back, debt wiped clean. Just had to do him a favour. Sounded too good to be true.’ He shook his head. ‘Turns out, it was.’

‘What was the favour?’ Clare asked.

He took a moment to answer then, with a glance at his solicitor, he said, ‘He told me he’d been doing a bit of digging. Found out I used to be a gamekeeper. Thought I’d be a good shot. And he said – he said, if I did a wee job for him we’d call it quits. No more payments.’

Clare watched him carefully. ‘And the wee job?’