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Chapters (21)
  1. Cover
  2. Title Page
  3. Dedication
  4. Author’s Note
  5. Rob
  6. Spare Time
  7. Nig
  8. Kid in the Park
  9. Work
  10. Benny Boy
  11. Foster Care
  12. Graffiti
  13. Truth Be Told
  14. The Big Wait
  15. Jack
  16. Respect
  17. Graffiti
  18. Cemetery
  19. I Dare You
  20. Taralune Rag, Sunday
  21. Revelation

RIP old mate. How about a memorial at the tree?

imageGrunge

I can get a cross made.

imageAndrew H

Yeah we need a cross and flowers at the tree.

imageJack

Pen doesn’t like crosses.

imageGrunge

As if youd no.

imageBertha

No memorial near Old Man, just leave him be.

imageLionel

I agree Bertha, that’s what a cemetery’s for.

imageAndrew H

Your right. Just cut the tree down.

imageGrunge

Good one Andrew H

imageBertha

Why would you want a memorial at the place your loved one was killed at? It’s a place of devastation and distruction and carnage. There’s nothing nice about such a place.

imageMr Bunnings

Maybe it’s a reminder to go steady Bertha. Just my 2 cents worth.

imageChrissie Lucas

Only one person was holding the steering wheel, can’t believe Rob did that to his own brother.

imageCarol Huchie

Chrissie Lucas it was an accident. Rob didn’t even know Pen was under the tarp.

imageSarah

It wasn’t there fault. If anything it was the tree’s fault. They were going down to Brizzy. Rob and Joey were just clowning around like they always do.

imageThe Butcher

They were trying to drift. That bend has a reverse camber, perfect for drifting if you get it right. Unfortunately the driver buggered up. It won’t be the first or the last time it happens because you young people continue to be dickheads and push boundaries.

imageCarol Huchie

Thinking of you Dave, you’re a great dad. One boy with the angels and one in hospital, hang in there love xx.

imageThe Butcher

Great dad?

imageCarol Huchie

What does that mean?

imageThe Butcher

It means he was a dealer. He may not have started it all but it didn’t take him long to take over. How do you reckon he’s paying for that big house out at The Retreat?

imageAndrew H

He’s a successful builder.

imageCarol Huchie

Your wrong butcher.

imageThe Butcher

Is that right Carol Huchie, loyalty goes a long way when you’re a faithful customer.

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imageSally Ann

That’s why there were heaps of cops searching Dave’s sheds.

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imageLeslie

The first time we saw the fireflies last night, it was bigger than I could ever imagine. We’re absolutely positive Pen was part of the magic. Rest in Peace mate xxxx

By Pen Bower
Year 10
Taralune High School

P.S. Hi Mrs Mac, there’s lots of spelling mistakes in the memorial page feed, but that’s how I wanted it. That’s how we talk and text and write. You said to be authentic so tada!